1) If you make over 500,000 they must donate a percentage of that money to the poor- this ensures that the poor will have some money to live on and it will make things more equal.
2) We have that they
have to donate all their old things before buying new ones- this will help make
sure that the poor have furniture to live with too.
3) They have to do a
charity type thing and take time out of their day to teach the poor-this will
ensure that the poor have at least a decent education so they have chances of
being successful too.  |
Great post. I like your use of organization --giving each rule essentially its own separate paragraph.
ReplyDeleteOne thing to work on going forward: elaborating more one words such as "thing". Try to avoid using this in writing.
Keep up the good work!